When looking at the draft of the script I remembered something that Ellie suggested in an earlier meeting. She said that we should use the objects in the flashbacks and show them in the present day somewhere in the house. For example during the flashback including the beach ball we could show it in the present in a box in a cupboard. Or when Jon gives Melissa the house key, we could show the key dusty on a shelf somewhere. I feel that this is a better way of transitioning from flashback to present day as I think that it would break up the sequence a little better. Update - we were unable to find all the props in time and therefore had to stick with the original script
I LOVE this idea - great way of transitioning, well done - maybe test shoot & edit required?? You can add this to your blog
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