Specific details
Idea
- Was a unique take on a romantic short film
- The title "Shells" had a good link to the film without revealing much about the plot. Draws people into the film
- The theme of shells was something that the film manages to show throughout
- Having the death of the wife not become apparent until the end has a large impact on the audience.
Camera
- Good variation of shot types throughout the film
- Most of the shots are steady (a few camera shakes due to wind and the nature of some of the shots)
- Everything is in focus
- All the shots are framed correctly
- The variation of shots and angles helped to engage the audience and create sympathy towards older Jon.
Editing
- Very good continuity throughout the edit
- Managed to cut down long scenes
- Filter on the flashbacks adds a nice effect to the film
Sound
- The sound helps the audience become engrossed in the main characters storyline
- The cut of the soundtrack when the kettle goes off adds a nice effect
- Nice variation on diegetic and non-diegetic sound
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