We finally managed to come up with a logline that we all liked:
"Drifting from past to present remembering the best moments of their time together."
The word "drifting" links the movie to the sea while also gives the sense of just going through the motions. The logline also doesn't reveal too much about the couple and who is remembering the best moments. It manages to get across the story we are trying to tell but also grip the audience into wanting to find out more about the film.
A very clear log line - distilling your idea really helps to crystallise it in your mind as well as communicate it clearly to your audience, well done
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